Poetry

I declare for you my love

I declare for you my love
I declare it for the first time
I thought I loved thousands of times
But this is the first time
All the other times were a lie
And without you I would die

When first I saw you
I couldn’t resist saying I love you
The magic in your eyes
Made me fly up into the skies
You dwell deep into my heart
And nothing will break us apart

I declare for you my love
I declare for the first time

2007-08-21 12:44:58 · 11 answers · asked by ? 6

I Scream Helplessly into the Night

Darkness comes, the world freezes
in time,
through the window the
moonlight shines.
Not uttering a word nor daring to breath,
from the blackness it continues to seethe.
Standing there stalking, preying
on me,
the deadliest predator that I
cannot see
the thing I fear, the object of my fright
and I scream helplessly into the night.

2007-08-21 12:39:47 · 7 answers · asked by Viva La Alexander! 2

my boyfriend wrote it for me and i was wondering guys, if this is how you really feel when your too wrapped up in your IQ to say

When you are sad I will dry your tears
When you are scared I will comfort your fears
When you need love, my heart I will share
When you are sick, I will be there and care

You will feel my love when ever we are apart
Knowing that nothing can change my heart
When you are worried, I will give you hope
When you are confused or tense, I will help you cope

When you are lost, and can't see the light
My love will be the star, shining so bright
This is for you, one that I keep till the end
For you are my life and friend

These words which express my feelings, speak of my love for you
From my lips these words spoken, will always be true
I have been blessed, with your hand in mine
Both of our hearts will never unwind

2007-08-21 11:43:48 · 8 answers · asked by Donna H 2

Let's give it a go, shall we?

The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming
ABAB in which the second and fourth lines
of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding
quatrain; each quatrain introduces a
new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD.


The design is simple:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8


Anyone care to begin?

All the Best, Shad @)~>~

{I'm making a new account just so I can join in kk? It'll be under "AHShadowRai"}

2007-08-21 02:18:24 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3

Blue
Azure Sea of stillness
Cornflower dance in autumn golden hue
Turquoise left on a window edge
Sapphirine gaze locked embrace
Cobalt mood that lingers
Under thinning noonday sky
So well I know that colour
Blue

2007-08-21 01:54:47 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

Once again here lies the eerie mist
A well of recollection
To look inside I was afraid
But now the key is turned and I am not forsaken
Words lie hidden in the eerie mist
Spontaneity has its own cure
Has its own way to filter through the darkness
And bring light to a brand new day

Me and you were lovers
In another time and place
How I felt your fingers and
Felt your warm embrace
For , for long have I wondered
Amongst the eerie mist
I lost you now I weep
Years wash against my door

For I am a lonely traveler
Looking to tell me tale
Listen to me sweetness
This time I can not fail
She told me in a whisper
She sang it on the wind

One day love will find you
One day you will be king


And now I wait and wonder for I can see your door
The road was long and tiresome
The road we all adore
When death came she came lightly
She passed me in my dreams

Now the mist has passed and the world is much the same
Love is now fluent and speaks a weathered tongue
Love flows through to everyone
Time stands still and the river flows
Enter through this door my friend
And you will surely know,
The mysteries bred of darkness pain and sorrow

When the hills they trembled
When your mind assembled
Lost count of those wicked lies
That poured through a funnel
I shut my eyes and you were lost
Down the sleepy tunnel

The mine is deep , the river flows
Yes deep she goes
Past the highest mountain
And passed the dark eerie mist

. Dec. 2005

2007-08-21 01:44:35 · 8 answers · asked by likeminded 3

SAVE ME

Broken on the inside
Lost within my mind
Searching for a reason
While my heart is left behind

No actual words are spoken
as I call for help
I'm deaf to all who try
"Save me!" calls from closed lips
And no one can here my cry

When I'm laughing amongst my friends
I've never felt so alone
Yet my mind becomes crowded
and obstructed
When I'm on my own

Floating through existance
Childrens laughter echoes through my ears
I hear their piercing screams of pain
As they live out their sleeping fears

"Save me!" pleads from my resting tongue
Still no distinct answer to my cry
I just lie here
Detached and unaware
Not even wondering why..


Let me know what you think, I wrote it when I was 15 and I'm not sure if I like it, I rarely like my own poems.
I'd love to know what others think and maybe have some helpful suggestions..
Thanks!

2007-08-20 23:25:08 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

All Alone

I want to taste vengence
I'm tired of our romance
All you do is lie to me
I don't get how we can be
Together anymore
So I walked out that door
I left you all alone
And your pain shone
I knew about you and her
But I wanted to be sure
That I waited to hurt you
I don't care about being "true"
I am so over you
Now I don't care what you do
I'm finally free
To be the real me
You didn't come after me
You let me be
I left you all alone
I left you on your own
I'm not sorry
You told your story
And now I'm telling it
Because my fury is finally lit

2007-08-20 19:32:34 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous

LOVE
I love thee with all my being.
I feel your essence coarse through me.
I see you in all things.
You more than complete me,
you are me and I you.
My chest aches,
I can not breath,
your love takes hold,
takes my breath away.
I see you in the stars,
the mountains, the lakes,
in the bluest of skies, and,
in the darkness of nights.
Your light warms me,
fills me with joy,
releases me from my fears,
bestows on me the knowledge
to receive and give.
You fill my hunger, my wanting,
my needs.
(c)

2007-08-20 19:02:10 · 6 answers · asked by *JC* 4

I Love You

I'm tired of waiting for you
And I think you're tired too
I just want to hold you
And for you to hold me too
But you betrayed me
You broke my heart and made it bleed
And now I can't stop crying
And now you can't stop lying
You say you're sorry
But that's just a story
You broke my heart
And now we are apart
You knew how I felt about you
Are the rumors true
Do you really love me too
Because you know I love you
But now I can't think about it
You extinguished the flame that was lit
I can't speak to you anymore
And now I'm not sure
How I feel about you
Can you ever be true
No you can't
So stop listen to me rant
Go live your life as a player
And leave me, you slayer
You killed me inside
You killed my pride
Now all I do is cry
And all you do is lie

2007-08-20 18:41:27 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

I recently started writing haikus for fun. What's your opinion on these? I realize some of these are not true haikus, since they deal with human elements and some words end in ING, but I'm just trying my hand at them.


Sleeping angels stir,
As the dawn begins anew,
A new beginning.

The dragon breathes
The fire of creation,
Then he sleeps once more.

Grace under fire,
A cruel world to bare,
The triumph of you.

Softly spoken echos,
Of the cherished times gone by-
Our hearts remember.

2007-08-20 18:32:38 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous

Wow!!!!
Every time I think of you together,
I just want to cry.
It’s like I’m in bad weather,
I just wish he would die.

From the pain inside,
To the pain outside,
I just wish I could hide,
And just let all the lies collide.

Nothing has changed,
It’s all just the same,
It’s all just deranged.
It’s all just one big game,
And you just play along.
U believe all his lies,
Which I think is just wrong,
Because u cave into all his buys.

I don’t think u know how much I care,
Which I hope you soon realize,
Because sometimes I just can’t bare,
And I wish I can idealize!

But that can’t happen,
Because every time I try,
The picture is just misshapen,
He is just not the right guy!

I just want u to breakup,
But then he’ll just convince u.
Then u’ll makeup,
And u’ll still have no clue.
Yet u’ll have another shakeup,
But you just won’t listen to our crew!

We’ve been trying to tell ya,
U just won’t listen.
We just feel so blah,
U think he just glistens!

But this isn’t about me,
Or our crew,
It’s just the way it will be,
All about YOU!

I would never mean to hurt u,
In any way, shape, or form.
All of this is true,
I just want u back to norm.

I want the person I miss,
When u were happy,
When the fun we had existed,
When every thing was SNAPPY!

That person was my best friend,
Always by my side,
But that has to come to an end,
Especially when he lies.

He took u away from us,
Swept u off ur feet.
Left us in the dust,
Which left us in defeat.

Then we got u back,
I guess we were the spoiled ones.
We never expected the SMACK!
We once again we missed u tons!

This time is hasn’t ended yet,
I just really want u back again.
I’m just waitin for that one threat,
Then all I will say is AMEN!

2007-08-20 18:10:32 · 6 answers · asked by iwillalwysluvu 1

ok
8th grade
west hall
city: mustang
mascot: broncos!

need a good name for our hall
any suggestions? help please just give ideas or whatever please. =D

2007-08-20 16:21:10 · 5 answers · asked by arikashikari 2

Has anyone ever told you how beautiful you are?
So beautiful and here you are with me.

From the very first I noticed, you are God's gift to all of us,
and the holder of a very special key.

Do people try to stop you, so they can say "I love you".
You add love to everything you do.

Someone must've mentioned you're a beautiful work of art.
You filled the hollow chambers in my heart.

You mean no one's ever whispered,"You're nothing less than a miracle"?
Well "You're nothing less than a miracle" to me.

Is it OK to tell you that just your elegant presence,
makes me want to wrap myself in thee?

2007-08-20 16:11:07 · 10 answers · asked by paris 2

Politician

It's got a slimy disposition
Like an oily transmission

Its promises are steep and deep
The alert see it's just a heap

Rewards -- only others reap.

It runs and runs til dereliction
Is an answered prayer from benediction

And can defeat reverse the heat
from you who burned us common sheep

A loss -- I want to keep.

I sort of decided to do this as an exercise. See if I could go to a poetry thread and write a poem.

Don't be too harsh. I'm not a poet.

If there is a glaring problem though, alert me.

2007-08-20 15:50:46 · 2 answers · asked by knownothing 2

" A work in progress"
Those words stay in my head
I will always remember
Those words that were said

Standing on the ground
Looking up at the sky
Not quite ready to leap or rise
Not quite ready to be a butterfly

"A work in progress"
That says it all
Too long I've been standing back
Ready to fall

People told me to shed my cocoon
But I wasn't ready
It was too soon

"A work in progress"
Describes where I'm at
I'm slowly becoming
Theres no turning back

2007-08-20 15:25:32 · 5 answers · asked by SnowWhite92 4

If you don't know the format of an 'I Am" poem, here it is:
http://ettcweb.lr.k12.nj.us/forms/iampoem.htm

I know that I suck @ poetry...it's not my stron point...just want to know if it's worth a good grade? thnx =]


I am young and aware.
I wonder what goes on there.
I hear the shots and the bombs.
I see the troops fighting to stay calm.
I want the battle to disappear.
I am young and aware.

I pretend that it's already done.
I feel that it really has just begun.
I touch the button to change the channel.
I worry that it's going to get worst.
I cry because it's still not over.
I am young and aware.

I understand that it will not suddenly end.
I say , "Stop the fighting; peace is what I recommend."
I dream that there's something someone will do.
I try to turn the bad news into good news.
I hope that possibly that dream will come true.
I am young and aware.

2007-08-20 15:03:05 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous

{We have renters who have become friends with an aquaintence I know. They live at the begining of our driveway where the new elementery was built. Not even 100 yards away. My kids were excited to walk the driveway to school this year but, are scared now due to all the "drug trafficing" going on. Hopefully, this week, they'll all be gone...the druggies, you know?}


F**k the kids??????


School’s
now in session
dopers messin’
with coke and
meth and
marijuana

Wanna be
dealers
turnin
squealers
into dope heads
‘cause they wanna

F*ck the kids!????
NO!
F*CK
YOU
ALL!!!!!

The “Feds” have
already been called.

Within 100 yards
you are

Burn meth-lab
just outside my yard

My kids need fear
you not,
no more!

Sirens, they wail,

I close the door...

2007-08-20 14:46:45 · 13 answers · asked by ? 3

ok, I was thinking and I came up with the expression "the waters green" but I don't know what or how to make a poem out of a phrase. all ideas are welcome!!

2007-08-20 14:42:43 · 7 answers · asked by ? 3

I started writing this poem but I'm not sure how to end it:

What do you see?
What can it be?
Your point of view
Is what you see inside of you

An empty room
Can be peaceful and quiet
A quiet you love to hear,
But to someone else,
It's beyond loud-
Torture to their ears

Your only friend could be the moon,
That hangs in the sky so bright,
Or it could be your enemy for standing in the way,
Of extinguishing all the light.

What do you think?? Any suggestions or comments?

2007-08-20 14:36:29 · 7 answers · asked by SnowWhite92 4

KayJay
Written by Semper Fi 83 8/20/07

I looked out in my garden,
And there on the fountain beyond my french doors,
Was a lovely and rare bird.
Whose call sounded like somewhat of a word.
KAYJAY! KAYJAY!

As I paused to reflect,
This new song charged my intellect,
And I found that I was now in a trance.
A hypnosis induced dance of sorts,
For my head had become an auditorium.
Right next to the Chrysanthemums!
All there was was the call of this bird,
KAYJAY! KAYJAY!

As I looked at the light,
The doctor was holding,
I thought back to that lovely bird.
That's when I yelled KAYJAY! KAYJAY!

Then the needle........sleepy.........

2007-08-20 12:39:36 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous

I cannot take it anymore these
thoughts make no sense if I told
you I dont think you would understand
Because no one understands all the pain
Im feeling inside everything you want me to be
is falling right in front of you I fear I may fall from
grace I fear that this will never end I pretend to be
ok but when Im alone no one hears me cry I need
you to know that Im not ok I need you to lisen but you
dont want to see the pain Im suffering,I can feel you
all around me your every where please help me through
this I need you so much right now you tell me it will all
be okay but your wrong it will never be okay Im getting
closer to edge Im about to break my heart is breaking
my arms are bleeding please come I need you
you told me the three speacil words

2007-08-20 10:46:25 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous

today a day like any other day
the sun is shining the children play
suddenly staccato sound of machine gun fire
people run falling getting caught in razorwire

gangster war police shooting people run
somebody shout beware help his got a gun
gangster fire on police children scatter one and all
running for life on the capeflats in the dust they fall

2007-08-20 10:27:39 · 7 answers · asked by northlookeagle 2

i will choose the most beautifule depresive poem that you will send me . this is mine dark poem(not much as a poem but i try):




World feeding my soul cry
Hearts drowning in tears wishing to die
Mind bearing the unbearable weight of flesh,
with no use only good for trash.
No word was spoken,
hide behinde hearts brocken.
And me with the hell flames burning inside ,
traped in a cage with nothing left but rage.
Stuk between life and death ,
wolking through endless path

2007-08-20 09:56:46 · 3 answers · asked by her 2

Sometimes…Love…My Love!

Sometimes love isn’t real,
Sometimes it’s just an emotion that you think you feel.
Sometimes love can hurt,
Sometimes it can make you feel filthy as dirt.
Sometimes it can make you feel like your life is over, suicidal even; maybe.
But sometimes your love is strong for your significant other; you baby.
But sometimes love can be meant for a mother, a brother, someone close to you, don’t gotta be family.

No one knows the real definition of love,
But mine is it’s an emotion that you feel for the people you care about.
But sometimes it can make you wanna pull out your hair; and be out.
Sometimes people are bound; to find that one for them…
And when I think about it sometimes;
I think I found him!
Sometimes…I think I found love…My love!


By: Minny

2007-08-20 09:41:17 · 18 answers · asked by Mz. Tr3ma1n3 N3v3rs0n 585 2

I wrote another poem at work today. TEll me what you think. Any improvements needed? Is it fine the way it is? Be honest.

Untitled

It has taken it's toll on me,
and I don't know why.
You mean more to me than anything else.
Maybe that is why this is so hard on me,
Because I have never been this close to anybody before.
Not seeing your smile hurts me,
But I know seeing me hurts you too.
I know you are just mad and you want to stay best friends.
Should it be over? I don't want it and I don't think it should.
You brighten my day up and I don't want to lose you.
But I can't give up and I will not give up.

2007-08-20 07:09:40 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous

Heard she was in a relationship with Nathalie Barney & that she wrote lots of quality poems abt their romance. I've tried the public library bt unfortunately couldn't seem to find any of her works =(

2007-08-20 01:55:52 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

The two lines I have are this:

"Standing close is a frosted glass"
Holding dry sweetness within
or
"Sitting close is a frosted glass"
Holding dry sweetness within

My question to you is this, should I use the "Standing" or should I use the "Sitting"
Does a glass sit or stand?

This is to be the beginning line of the second verse
In which my second line follows.

2007-08-20 00:01:31 · 21 answers · asked by Sam 4

i love em

2007-08-19 18:56:50 · 14 answers · asked by skateordie 1

I've got an essay on it

2007-08-19 15:49:43 · 7 answers · asked by sean b 2