Let's give it a go, shall we?
The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming
ABAB in which the second and fourth lines
of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding
quatrain; each quatrain introduces a
new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD.
The design is simple:
Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4
Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8
Anyone care to begin?
All the Best, Shad @)~>~
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2007-08-21 02:18:24 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
(so far)
I traveled this way years ago
Not knowing what I might see.
Back then I just couldn't have known
How the way would start to shape me
Not knowing what I might see.
I carried walking down the track
How the way would start to shape me
I must go forward and never look back.....
I carried walking down the track,
All the memories I could hold.
I must go forward and never look back;
New adventures to behold!
{All the memories I could hold
Bore crevices in my heart
New adventures to behold
New pages left to part
Bore crevices in my heart,
Only time can mend
New pages left to part
Wish you were here my friend}
2007-08-21 13:35:51 · answer #1 · answered by TrollHunter 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
1-2-3-4, 2-5-4-6, 5-7-6-8, 7-3-8-1.
I was on a round trip
Sailing the Philippine seas.
I almost flip
When I consumed all of my whiskey's
Sailing the Philippine seas.
I managed to get to Mindanao
When I consumed all of my whiskey's
Tagging along with my Tito
I managed to go to Mindanao
Foods served fresh and sizzling
Tagging along with my Tito
On earthen road we were riding
Foods served fresh and sizzling
I almost flip
On earthen road we were riding
I was on a round trip.
2007-08-29 02:17:05 · answer #2 · answered by Brian_Galang 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
September Poem ( I can hardly wait )
At least in September there are many activities
about 1 or 2 annniversaries
There is more to say
including many of them someone's birthdays
one in particular that would be mine
this could be a sign
I could celebrate twice
which would be nice
Celebrating these events are necessary
well at least to me.
One occasion would be Labor Day
however you celebrate, make it your own way.
2007-08-21 07:59:44 · answer #3 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I travelled this way years ago
Not knowing what I might see.
Back then I just couldn't have known
How the way would start to shape me
Not knowing what I might see.
I carried walking down the track
How the way would start to shape me
I must go forward and never look back.....
2007-08-21 03:59:50 · answer #4 · answered by aggie D 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I carried walking down the track,
All the memories I could hold.
I must go forward and never look back;
New adventures to behold!
2007-08-21 04:17:01 · answer #5 · answered by dawnUSA 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I travelled this way years ago
Not knowing what I might see.
Back then I just couldn't have known
How the way would start to shape me.
2007-08-21 03:17:01 · answer #6 · answered by Bre the Pumpkin Queen 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
...the leaves of passion,,,,
....will never turn,,,,
,,,if the truth of compassion,
,,,,is rooted ,,,within the heart.
will never turn?,,,,
this feeling,,so dear,,,that,
is rooted within the heart.....?
..i touch with open arms,or perhaps flowing tears.
d.8/21/07
ps;i think that's what you mean?had to put two things together to make one.i am not schooled in writing poetry in any ways or means.
take care,
d.
2007-08-21 06:42:23 · answer #7 · answered by dorian 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Only time can mend
The tear in true love's heart
Wish you were here my friend
You were my better part
2007-08-26 08:31:26 · answer #8 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you comprehend me consistently doing something loopy, I tell them to take a image it lasts longer & they could stick their tongue out at me & i could say no thank you i take advantage of lavatory paper! Ha:)
2016-10-16 08:09:44 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Malays have different version and I have no objection on yours.
2007-08-21 03:42:13 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋