Blue
Azure Sea of stillness
Cornflower dance in autumn golden hue
Turquoise left on a window edge
Sapphirine gaze locked embrace
Cobalt mood that lingers
Under thinning noonday sky
So well I know that colour
Blue
2007-08-21 01:54:47 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I know nothing of the mechanics of writing poetry but your words painted a most beautiful picture behind my eyes. K.L.S.
2007-08-21 02:07:00 · answer #1 · answered by Bemo 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good very good indeed I enjoyed this poem very much I liked the self-imposed rules and it seems that it really follows your own rules and it seems very structured and yet it seems it doesn't take away from how much life is in this poem.
2007-08-21 07:23:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anthony M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very calming and lovely. I love it!
2007-08-21 02:06:38 · answer #3 · answered by red 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! Very sweet, well done.
2007-08-21 02:22:23 · answer #4 · answered by Siamese Triplets 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋