my boyfriend wrote it for me and i was wondering guys, if this is how you really feel when your too wrapped up in your IQ to say
When you are sad I will dry your tears
When you are scared I will comfort your fears
When you need love, my heart I will share
When you are sick, I will be there and care
You will feel my love when ever we are apart
Knowing that nothing can change my heart
When you are worried, I will give you hope
When you are confused or tense, I will help you cope
When you are lost, and can't see the light
My love will be the star, shining so bright
This is for you, one that I keep till the end
For you are my life and friend
These words which express my feelings, speak of my love for you
From my lips these words spoken, will always be true
I have been blessed, with your hand in mine
Both of our hearts will never unwind
2007-08-21 11:43:48 · 8 answers · asked by Donna H 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it is really sweet, but i think your guy may be a rare find, because most men dont talk like this or feel like this for that matter. your a lucky gal.
2007-08-21 11:48:53 · answer #1 · answered by vineruby 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a sweet poem and I like it. Anybody would love to receive a heartfelt expression like it.
As to the actual poem, it needs some tweeking just so there's not so much repitition and so it flows better. But I think when you are trying to express your heart to somebody, the "really good poem" is the one that means so much to you personally and dug into your own heart where it was meant to.
2007-08-21 19:46:38 · answer #2 · answered by autumlovr 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It won't win the Pulitzer Prize, but your boyfriend's a keeper!
2007-08-21 18:48:57 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my god!
That was a beautiful poem.
I have never read something like that.
Even though it wasn't deep.
2007-08-21 20:08:32 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems like he's wrapped up in you. He's in wuv (or something like that).
2007-08-21 18:49:07 · answer #5 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good poem, but not very deep, and kind of amateurish
2007-08-21 18:47:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its ok i guess. Not great.
2007-08-21 18:48:52 · answer #7 · answered by Natalie90 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good
2007-08-21 18:47:09 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋