First off, her name is Whitney, so I made each line start with same that lettering. You'll see what I'm talking about. Anyway, do you have any advice on how I could make it better? Thank you!
Without knowing, my mind couldn't help but wonder.
Hoping, praying it was you.
In sweet honesty and truth, my heart was torn asunder.
The chances of it being true...
Never seemed so long; oh how your gorgeous face shone that night.
Eyes full of life, impossible to avert; attracting me further still.
Yearning ensued, for you -- a wondrous spectacle of sight.
2007-01-28
07:39:50
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