Poetry

i need notes for GCSE english language paper 2: poems from different cultures

2007-05-30 01:07:11 · 1 answers · asked by Ricky L 1

deja vu

its deja vu
im talking to you
dad,father,what ever you will
guess its time for another pill
its not just cowincidence
your a hypercondriac
now its time to react
you fool you liar you con
your the kind i look down upon
i knew not to trust what you said
this is the day me and my mom
have gone to dread
no more sympathy for you
you get what you choose
what else can i say
its deja vu

BY:Harmony Gjertsen

Just let me know if you liked it and what where your thoughts on it thank you.

2007-05-29 23:42:25 · 6 answers · asked by fdffhhjyuj 1

Wind blows the curtains
Flopping wildly today
My homework is dust

2007-05-29 23:15:05 · 4 answers · asked by HardLee 2

We shall live in a world of peace,
violence, never to be found.
As hallowed as golden fleece,
this world shall be bound.
All war, guns, haste an’ anger shall be silenced.
Forget about today, and start remembering bout tomorrow.
You fight for a cause, but you’ll receive defiance.

Someone died that night on the gallows,
innocent or guilty, it will not be known,
For my friends, and friends of fellows,
the leaves on God’s doorstep have not blown.

Each human being, only a pawn in the game,
never realizes their part in society’s blame,
blinded by the wrath of glamour an’ fame.

But, it ain’t hard to see the things in life,
that mean a lot to me an’ my wife.
The cliffs that line the ocean so mighty,
the hills that shape the land so high.
The creatures that roam upon it,
in richness of the beauty of Aphrodite.

People abuse the creation,
who has been ever lovin’ and kind.
But shan’t it be stopped, it needs salvation.
Jesus came down to save us all humans,
from the depths of hell an’ a force so evil.

But, I’m asking Lord,
Where is the salvation, for your creation?
For the plants, the animals and landscape,
certainly they deserve some salvation?

2007-05-29 21:55:12 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

I just recently wrote some poems and I just wanted to see what everyone thought of it.. any suggestions, opinions ideas are greatly appreciated. THANKS!

What's The Point?
What's the poing of living
When all you want to do is die?
When that part in your heart is missing.
How can you live knowing that, that void
Will never be filled again?
You hear peope trying to help you
They tell you to "stick it out"
How can you "stick it out"
When it makes you sick just the thought of
Losing all those precious memories?
It's more complicated then I can explain.
It's like an addiction that
Takes you through the stages of desperation.
It could never be the same,
It makes your life seem so lame.
Like you can't blame it on anyone, but yourself.
Whats the poing of living
When all you do is hope to die?

2007-05-29 18:28:23 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous

I just recently wrote some poems and I just wanted to see what everyone thought of it.. any suggestions, opinions ideas are greatly appreciated. THANKS!

Someone Else's Eyes
From someone else's eyes
I might look perfect
From someone else's eyes
This world is like a wild carnival ride
From someone else's eyes
I may look like a successful person
But the reality is not even close
From someone else's eyes
I may be strong
But if you believe that I am strong
You guys are all so wrong
From someone else's eyes
I might have everything going for me
Your eyes may be deceiving you
From someone else's eyes
I might look perfect
But the reality is not even close.

2007-05-29 18:24:06 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous

You said you loved me
You said that you cared
And you also said
That you would always be there

Then I believed you
Thought it was true
I though that you were "the one"
You made me believe that too

Next thing I no
You stop showing affection
And I start to wonder
if we're going in the right direction

A few days later
You say that we're done
And that you need a friend
You ask if I'll be the one

Though there are tears
Running down my face
I say I'll always love you
And I'll gladly take that place

So here I am
A single man again
WIth a broken heart
But a very good friend

2007-05-29 15:56:37 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous

thanks!

2007-05-29 14:01:41 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous

"Pieces of glass violently drown the floor,
As I lay shattered and broken at the core.
The light can no longer pass through,
A hopeless heart tells me there's nothing I can do.
Perhaps people were born just to die
But as I see it, that's a lie."

Ummmmmm what?

2007-05-29 09:53:19 · 7 answers · asked by imaqtpai 1

ZERO

I don't know why that I have to pretend,
The sum of my life just a box of old sand
I e-mailed you back but I never pressed send
The scars of my life like the veins on my hand

I never ever thought that I'd grow up a zero
My life just a relic in some forgotten old ruin
I never set out trying to be someones damn hero
Right now I'm as dangerous as a kitten thats mewing

It's time to go home, my car and a wall
A box is forever my home for eternity
If I listen real hard I hear lucifer call
Just come take my hand and I'll show you serenity.

A girl dressed in black with no eyes in her face
It's all over now can you feel my contempt
Another girl appears her face covered in lace
God he looks down and say's "It's too late to repent"

2007-05-29 09:51:30 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-05-29 09:37:39 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-05-29 03:55:06 · 3 answers · asked by Link 5

This is a poem i wrote last night about a girl who hates her body?
I need your advice on this poem i wrote last night?
In need of some real opinions here!?
is it okay bad or good?

their looks and body i despise
anger and jealousy soon arise
a need for perfect i cannot subdue
im alone down here with no one but you
always so critical always so mean
with all these troubles i must come clean
i hate when i breath, it means im still here
im living my life with nothing but fear

Additional Details

10 minutes ago
its about a book i read, not my life

9 minutes ago
im 13 lol. way to weird for me right, but stilll its about a depressed girl in a book

2007-05-29 03:45:17 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous

Life's a pleasant tradition.

Life's wing is as vast as death.

Life's a jump the size of love.

Life's not something,

we put on the mantel of habit

and forget.

It does not matter where I am.

The sky is always mine.

Windows, ideas, air, love,

earth, all mine.

Why does it matter if sometimes,

the mushrooms of nostalgia grow?

Let's take off our clothes.

Water is just a foot away.

Let's have a basket and

fill it up with all the greens

and all the reds.

We are not to comprehend;

the secret of roses, but maybe

swiming in the incantation of roses.

Or may be looking for

the song of truth

between the morning glory,

and the century.

2007-05-29 03:25:57 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous

Whats worng with the poem i wrote it needs something i just cant figure it out can you please?
thnks



You took my soul
You took my heart
And now you left an empty hole
When you said together forever,
I took you words
Now you made it worse
I wish you could see
If only you could see
Just for once see the way you mistreated me.

2007-05-29 03:08:01 · 12 answers · asked by Xtremly_cute 1

can u please ell me whatdo u think about these poems..and thank u


I want 2 know........

I want 2 know
If he loves me so...
I want 2 see
with him how's life gonna be...
I want 2 feel
If his love is real..
I want 2 hear
His words 2 me when he's near...
I want 2 be his
I want 2 be the one he'd miss...
I want 2 be next to him
coz life without him is so dim...
I want 2 be with him till the end
coz to me he's more than a friend...

.................................

YOU'RE THE ONE.....

you're the one 4 me
you're the clear one that i see
my love to u is greater than life
and sharper than a knife
there is nothing more i can do
more that to love you
you entered my heart & i locked u in
& locking u out would be my only sin
the day u entered my heart
is the day my life chose to start
this love is more than true
& it's alwayzz meant to be with u
& if u changed ur life to another way
deep in my heart u'll never ever get away
you're the 1 alwayz in my mind

2007-05-29 01:37:19 · 4 answers · asked by Nano 19 1

Preferably one sentence, and you don't mind me using it !!! :) :)

2007-05-29 01:12:55 · 15 answers · asked by freebird31wizard 6

It's you once again. Right back here in my life. The one who caused me heartbreak. The one who made me cry I Thought that I was over you made up my mind. Never to fall for the words you might say but somehow. You stole my heart away like a thief in the night. Why do I feel such a need to be held, touched , kissed by you so passionately. It seems I let my guard down just so you could get closer to me and though it's hard to explain I've got a dependency.
Are you aware of what you've done to me. How you could love me so sweetly and make me so weak. Unleashing the passion I had pent up inside. Releasing my soul from my body to reach an unattainable high. Why is it so hard in this situation I can't avoid Will my final decision prove right or wrong. I can't imagine living my life without you hear with me. Yet if we were to stay together I'm not quite sure where that would lead.
It's so hard living without you boo.
Sweet baby I got a dependency. Feel like I'm drifting on a melody.

2007-05-29 01:00:41 · 6 answers · asked by Sol is Real 2

I want 2 know........

I want 2 know
If he loves me so...
I want 2 see
with him how's life gonna be...
I want 2 feel
If his love is real..
I want 2 hear
His words 2 me when he's near...
I want 2 be his
I want 2 be the one he'd miss...
I want 2 be next to him
coz life without him is so dim...
I want 2 be with him till the end
coz to me he's more than a friend...

.......................................................................................................

YOU'RE THE ONE.....

you're the one 4 me
you're the clear one that i see
my love to u is greater than life
and sharper than a knife
there is nothing more i can do
more that to love you
you entered my heart & i locked u in
& locking u out would be my only sin
the day u entered my heart
is the day my life chose to start
this love is more than true
& it's alwayzz meant to be with u
& if u changed ur life to another way
deep in my heart u'll never ever get away
you're the 1 alwayz in my mind
you're the 1 hard to find
you're the 1 that's rare
you're the 1 that seems to me alwayz fair

2007-05-29 00:53:17 · 4 answers · asked by Nano 19 1

does this make sense? tell me the truth please because im not much of a writter

autumn leaves.

Autumn leaves fall like thoughtless feelings, they dont care where they fall or what tree they hang from. The autumn winds sway them and give them the life they need. the wind whispers a blissful song as they dance in a awying agreement. They dont have a care in the world, they sit swaying waiting for the wind to set them free. They take a chance and let go with out being able to look back, they sail along the streets as the wind guides them to places!

2007-05-28 21:32:25 · 8 answers · asked by Brooke 2

Doing a project and Require contructive criticism on this poem
http://gamahucherpress.yellowgum.com/books/poetry/zenana.pdf

2007-05-28 19:40:24 · 4 answers · asked by ANN 1

Crimson Lipstick
Eyes red,
Determination deep red,
She was poison and she knew it,
Experienced in her ways,
Patient in her execution,
Sweet smooth delivery that leaves her prey stunned,
Immobile from her as if paralyzed by her sting,
Short skirt to display long well maintained legs,
Perfect shoulders-just an arms length,
Passive hardened smile,
Incomprehensible by the youngings,
Slow dance strokes,
The night is long,
The game become prey,
The prey, the pursuit,
The bleeding, the kill,
She is pure poison.

2007-05-28 19:40:06 · 6 answers · asked by breezeb 1

Here is a sample of my writing



Internal Conflict


My heart & mind debate,
What can I do to gain enough courage?
Do I need to see you leave,
To know that it’s too late?
Do I need to cry to know the reason why
I let this moment pass me by?
I don’t want to go through the process of my heart beginning to heal
I know it’s going to happen….
So when should I reveal
This feeling I have for you, this feeling so strong.
If it’s really you I want
Then noting could be wrong.
Oh! What great agony to keep all of this ¬ tell a single soul.
This feeling of despair so great
A feeling of being alone.
Yes, you are the thought that keeps me up at night.
Twisting & turning, wondering if all of this is right.
When will I gain enough courage?
My heart & mind debate.
That when you leave, no one will be able to console me.
For then, it’ll be too late.

What do you think?
I wrote a few yrs ago

2007-05-28 19:01:06 · 10 answers · asked by Jane D 1

My Life

As I look at my life and what it has come to be.
The mess that I have in front of me.
The hopes I had, my dreams are burning out.
My conscious reaction is to scream and shout.
But I hold on- I have come too far,
I have to deal with realities that are,
Not the best,
But none the less,
They are mine,
And it is my option to make my life just fine,
Oh yes, you see, the choice is in me.
To do with my life as I damn well please.
So make no mistake take another look,
My life that I put in front of you as an open book,
Has been my adventure.
My journey through life’s tenure.
I will renew myself,
My physical, emotional, and mental health.
So now I see my life as something else.
Not a mess, but a wealth,
Of people places times and things,
That make us all such unique human beings.


Written By: S. J. Johnson

2007-05-28 18:55:10 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous

Ode To My Mullet

Oh mullet on high
How the end time with you is nigh
To shave you off would make me sigh
Make me quiver and make me cry
I love brown apple pie

My mullet, O so long and so frail
To lose you would leave me with no avail
You stink of gel and are of grandiose scale
Your front is curly and your back is like a tail
I have cut you and now I wail

2007-05-28 17:42:52 · 5 answers · asked by The Terminator 1

Need constructive criticism for this poem
http://gamahucherpress.yellowgum.com/books/poetry/THEFUCK.pdf

2007-05-28 17:36:23 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous

~Then And Now~

Who were you then, where am I now? Thoughts of you have faded, but never died. Feelings in my heart race across my mind as they rip me apart to the very brink of destruction.

Thinking of then, knowing now; I'm a fool for hoping we could ever be, yet my heart races on still. A chip off my heart has been stolen from me...am I to be blamed?

2007-05-28 16:16:47 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

Perfect is,
Being totally flawless
Perfect is,
Never looking like a mess
Perfect is,
Having the most beautiful voice
Perfect is,
Always making the right choice
Perfect is,
Being the best a person can be
Perfect is,
Not me

2007-05-28 15:07:03 · 18 answers · asked by SnowWhite92 4

In need of some real opinions here!?
is it okay bad or good?

their looks and body i despise
anger and jealousy soon arise
a need for perfect i cannot subdue
im alone down here with no one but you
always so critical always so mean
with all these troubles i must come clean
i hate when i breath, it means im still here
im living my life with nothing but fear

Additional Details

10 minutes ago
its about a book i read, not my life

9 minutes ago
im 13 lol. way to weird for me right, but stilll its about a depressed girl in a book

2007-05-28 11:27:49 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous

i have to have between 15 and 21 lines .2 sound devices 3 words of imagery and one figurative language.

School days
Are almost done
Friends will be missed One by one

The good times
Will always be here
Even if
Were far or near

Well grow and grow
Like a tree
Just you guys
Wait and see

Keep moving forward
But don't forget the past
The friends, the teachers
And each and every class

2007-05-28 07:20:25 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous