Perfect is,
Being totally flawless
Perfect is,
Never looking like a mess
Perfect is,
Having the most beautiful voice
Perfect is,
Always making the right choice
Perfect is,
Being the best a person can be
Perfect is,
Not me
2007-05-28 15:07:03 · 18 answers · asked by SnowWhite92 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It is good, and speaks the truth. No one is perfect except God and Jesus. Good use of repetition too.
:)
kara
2007-05-28 15:10:40 · answer #1 · answered by Kara P 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perfect.
2007-05-28 22:11:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting!
Your words are basic and do not consider all varieties of 'perfect'.
Think of a perfect diamond - there is none! All diamonds have flaws of some sort. Likewise, we also have flaws. No-one, nothing, is perfect - except God.
Please do not misunderstand - this is a nice attempt at describing 'perfection'. However, me thinks it needs a little work.
It is difficult at best to describe something we know little of, but you have done a nice job of it. Dig deeper!
The Ol' Sasquatch Ã
2007-05-28 22:17:46 · answer #3 · answered by Ol' Sasquatch 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um...maybe you should rewrite it...I didnt like it very much. Im sorry. I'd say put some more effort into it. If you are using a rhyme sceme, stick to it. Flawless and mess dont really rhyme well enough for this. But keep working on it...there is potential! =)
2007-05-28 22:37:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It just says that perfect is what the society and celebrities put on to be perfect and it is totaly the truth. No one can be "perfect"
2007-05-28 22:10:30 · answer #5 · answered by Savannah 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like that. A lot. I just wrote a poem today actually. But yeah. I like that. :-D Liked the ending.
2007-05-28 22:10:14 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A little shallow and a little vague. Maybe just too personal to have wide appeal.
2007-05-28 22:10:38 · answer #7 · answered by Alice K 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2007-05-28 22:24:36 · answer #8 · answered by ERIK H DUNCAN 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's ok. Would be more interesting to know why perfect isn't you.
2007-05-28 22:19:37 · answer #9 · answered by keri gee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's beautiful,yup nobody's perfect
2007-05-28 22:10:17 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋