Here is a sample of my writing
Internal Conflict
My heart & mind debate,
What can I do to gain enough courage?
Do I need to see you leave,
To know that it’s too late?
Do I need to cry to know the reason why
I let this moment pass me by?
I don’t want to go through the process of my heart beginning to heal
I know it’s going to happen….
So when should I reveal
This feeling I have for you, this feeling so strong.
If it’s really you I want
Then noting could be wrong.
Oh! What great agony to keep all of this ¬ tell a single soul.
This feeling of despair so great
A feeling of being alone.
Yes, you are the thought that keeps me up at night.
Twisting & turning, wondering if all of this is right.
When will I gain enough courage?
My heart & mind debate.
That when you leave, no one will be able to console me.
For then, it’ll be too late.
What do you think?
I wrote a few yrs ago
2007-05-28 19:01:06 · 10 answers · asked by Jane D 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
try:
http://www.lulu.com/
2007-05-28 19:43:02 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quizilla.com great web site since ur thing is up, i have just two things to say about it, one good, but to make it flow a bit better i would break it up a bit more, ex
My heart an mind debate,
What can I do
to gain enough courage?
Do I need to see you leave,
To know that it’s too late?
Do I need to cry
to know the reason why
I let this moment pass me by?
I don’t want to go through the process
of my heart beginning to heal
I know it’s going to happen….
So when should I reveal
This feeling I have for you, t
his feeling so strong.
If it’s really you I want
Then noting could be wrong.
hope u don't mind me playing with it
2007-05-29 02:04:53 · answer #2 · answered by Julie Ann 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry.com and when you go there they have links to a million other sights that you can put your poetry on! Are you just looking for a place to post or are you looking for contest? I like the one you submitted in this question.
2007-05-29 02:07:59 · answer #3 · answered by buttermommy817 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fictionpress.com
You might even get your poem reviewed!
I post all my poems there and it's a great site. You can post stories or essays and there are many genres too; like haiku.
2007-05-29 02:38:39 · answer #4 · answered by Essential 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
http://www.editred.com
I prefer this site for it's many useful features, and the fact it is limited to writing, unlike Deviantart.
2007-05-29 04:58:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Go to this website called www.poetryislife.org Amazing stuff for amazing people.
2007-05-29 02:03:42 · answer #6 · answered by otc108 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
poetry.conn on the net
2007-05-29 06:24:12 · answer #7 · answered by miranda1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
poetry.com
2007-05-29 02:02:43 · answer #8 · answered by Steph L 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
allpoetry.com
2007-05-29 07:51:54 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
deviantart.com
2007-05-29 02:04:00 · answer #10 · answered by had438 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋