I want 2 know........
I want 2 know
If he loves me so...
I want 2 see
with him how's life gonna be...
I want 2 feel
If his love is real..
I want 2 hear
His words 2 me when he's near...
I want 2 be his
I want 2 be the one he'd miss...
I want 2 be next to him
coz life without him is so dim...
I want 2 be with him till the end
coz to me he's more than a friend...
.......................................................................................................
YOU'RE THE ONE.....
you're the one 4 me
you're the clear one that i see
my love to u is greater than life
and sharper than a knife
there is nothing more i can do
more that to love you
you entered my heart & i locked u in
& locking u out would be my only sin
the day u entered my heart
is the day my life chose to start
this love is more than true
& it's alwayzz meant to be with u
& if u changed ur life to another way
deep in my heart u'll never ever get away
you're the 1 alwayz in my mind
you're the 1 hard to find
you're the 1 that's rare
you're the 1 that seems to me alwayz fair
2007-05-29 00:53:17 · 4 answers · asked by Nano 19 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
These poems are pretty cool. Particularly "You're The One..."
I like how you expressed the depth of your love in "my love to u is greater than life and sharper than a knife" Such a powerful touch and it expresses what true love is.
2007-05-29 04:05:17 · answer #1 · answered by Sol is Real 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I hope you will realise the graceful g is undoubtedly takin` the pish. However I would like to say that the contextural counterpoint in the third verse lends superlative juxtaposition to the ambient meter and texture leaving the reader to self reference from the work back to neo Christian values dependant upon their own internal dialogue. There you go Graceful, take a lesson from the master.
2007-05-29 02:37:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wish you would've written out the words and used better spelling and grammar. I like the feelings that were put into though.
2007-05-29 03:17:42 · answer #3 · answered by attitude600_9 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quite creative, tantalizing , a valid quest for identity and independence. . . . defiant stylistically like all concrete poetry that ridicule learned suffocating conventions.
2007-05-29 02:24:58 · answer #4 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋