Doing a project and Require contructive criticism on this poem
http://gamahucherpress.yellowgum.com/books/poetry/zenana.pdf
2007-05-28 19:40:24 · 4 answers · asked by ANN 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
When you have to pay someone to publish your work, it means you are not a very good author. Is that constructive enough for you?
2007-05-29 12:41:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the suitable way that's written, besides because of the fact the scale are a tad bit stressful for my area. The poem itself is o.k., i'm able to spot a pair lines that look too... "attempting to no longer elementary", like "or a scientific care with no scientific care". in no way, i've got self belief, are you able to justify that, and say that it relatively is clever. there is too many contradictions in it.
2016-12-18 07:23:57 · answer #2 · answered by hume 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Again!
Have a look at this, it's all about your favourite poet:
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23714
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2007-05-28 21:05:49 · answer #3 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
breath-taking!! amazing, "lays"!
2007-05-28 19:53:46 · answer #4 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋