i wrote this poem i just want peoples opinions please.
He left a little glow
Goddess tell me why i ache so much,
This increasing pain wont go away,
It started with a simple touch,
Ended so fast seemed like yesterday.
There is a prescious glow inside my womb,
We wre careful it must be fate,
Now hes gone my hearts a tomb,
Now i feel much love and hate.
Little glow inside i hope your fine,
I wont abandon you or lead you stray,
My heart will only heal in time,
Your fathers the one who went away,
Ill love you forever this i promise you,
He dosent want to help raise you my dear,
Little glow it will end up us two,
I pray goddess the glow inside will not emerge in a world full of fear.
FOR MY LIL PERSON INSIDE MY PERSON.
BY GEMMA E XX
written when pregnant
2007-07-11
06:51:32
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