Hi, here are some lyrics I recently written, don't worry i'm in my right mind, not depressed or anything. Just tell me what you think, and also what you think the lyrics are about.
Thanks In Advance!
-Joel
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Powerless To Fate
Powerless to fate, death lingers over her feverish soul
Slowly fading away, the black shade ensues
The final breath of life pulsates through the air
Like the cut of a knife, she separates from this world
Eternal damnation casts down its wretched claws
An incantation spoken from a serpent’s tongue
Flailing in darkness, falling, weeping, all hope erased
For this pitiable soul, bereaved is her embrace
He constraints
Spirits raped
Dark master
Let him take
Mortal crestfallen beauty
Dispatched in disarray
Swarming amongst the others
Abundant in decay
2007-03-01
20:09:40
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