i dont speak engish but i have it at school and i had to write a letter and others thigs for school-that was my homework and i did my best but im pretty sure that there are some words wrong so can u correct it please? if u do i will chose you for the best answer
just read and correct it
srry for my english
here are the 3 texts:
One of the places that I wanted to go was “The Coast Park”. When we arrived, I got excited cause the park looked amazing, it was full of rides, rollercoasters and all kind of games, but the best one was the vertical jump. It was so fascinating to jump 80 metres of height, it seems like you are flying for a few seconds. So if you are looking to go to a really exciting place, make you sure you go there, I’m pretty sure you won’t forget it.
damn i cant put the other letters cuz it says that its too long
2007-04-30
11:05:09
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naty f
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