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GOODBYE
Day after day,
The pain becomes more real,
All I can hope is maybe someday,
The hurt will finally heal,
I miss all the days laughing,
I miss the way you talked,
I miss all the smiling,
And all the times we walked,
The accident happened,
The pain will last,
I wonder if the risk would have slackened,
If you hadn't been going so fast,
My heart was breaking,
The news brought great grief,
It was breathtaking,
And I found no relief,
The pain was so terrible,
It still is to this day,
Sometimes it is unbearable,
Even to this very day,
This will hurt more than a bit,
The challenge is here,
I can find no way around it,
I have to say it here,
I will miss you,
I cannot lie,
I hope you miss me too,
But for now I have to say goodbye.
2007-07-13
15:23:35
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