I wrote this slightly morbid poem,do you have any hints for me?
~hearts eaten~
I'm eating her heart in the sands
of the beach where she used to take my hand
and tell me I was the only man
for her.
She'd show me where they all lay,
those men who led her heart astray.
She said "they never die in vain",
and I believed her.
When I had seen the crimes she did
I ran so far away and hid,
not knowing that a bullet would hit
her skull
When I came back from my fear
I saw what had become of my Dear,
and now my body will lie here
with her.
After taking notice of her suicide,
I took her body for a ride,
and we went back to the beach where we now reside
together.
I ripped her heart out of her chest,
and in devouring it I wished for her tan breasts,
those evil eyes,her warm caress
-but death had undone us-
Please help! (I posted in P&S but she just told me to go to a doctor 0.o; )
2007-06-21
06:17:43
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