i slowly turned the dark corner, my eyes half closed and my whole body shaking. i quickly drew in a cold breath. i turned my head, hoping my fears were 100% wrong. they werent. the door was opened again. he was here.where exactly, i didn't know. hoping he wasn't as close as i thought, i went down the dimly lit stairway. that was my first mistake. clinging to the cold wall, frightened by my own breathing, i finally reached the door. opening it was my second mistake. i peered my hear around the edge of the door. there he was.
i have to write a fiction story for my 7th grade english teacher, and i was wondering if after reading this, you would want to read more? constructional criticism welcome. thanks!
2007-02-17
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