I am writing this story. It is a very long story, but basically after their mother dies, siblings Sue and John hide her in the basement. John becomes increasingly obsessed with the thought that Sue killed their mother, and in punishment decides to make her believe she is going mad.
He writes messages on her bedroom mirror while she is asleep: IT WAS YOU or CAN YOU SEE NOW? It works and before long Sue is pushed to breaking point and having nightmares of their mother. Trust begins to break even quicker between the siblings through, and suspiciously, Sue does something that means she discovers John as the writer of the messages.
When she confronts him, he admits it, but threatens to call the police. She tells him he is in this just as much as she is, and he relents. Then I:
a. don't know how to finish it,
b. don't know how Sue can find out it's John.
PS: I don't want Sue to catch John in the act. Could it be done another way?
2007-09-14
03:36:02
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Rihannafan99
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