the following are some of my writings.. hope you could comment to each of them..
1st:
forever she looks from afar...
everything remains as it is. no winds of change could ever blow away the current stand, the existing truth, the mere reality.
forever as it is...
frozen in the coldness it brings. the weary heart he owns. imprisoned in the dark corners of his soul. she looks up in space for answers, waiting for hope to rain down upon her that could ease all her anxieties away..
take away... take me away
2nd:
stained truth
lies that are too blind to see
with the naked eye
rather it covers itself
the mere idea that deeply hurts
still not enough reasons
a need of strength
to unleash those chains
ignoring the pain of a dying heart
pierced with thorns
and yearns for truth...
3rd:
our eyes fixed..we remained silent, but our stare explained a hundred words.. told a thousand stories....
he caressed me gently with his hands. his warmth embraced me. i wish that i could just stay in that way forever. in a moment where my bare skin rubbed against his. where he could be close enough to share our intimate feelings. a time when we both get blinded by the love that's happening between us and only our heart's we feel. when it's just me and him that matters...
the moment was just too magical to explain with mere words.. my knight in shining armor takes me away, aboard his winged steed and brings me to his own world.. where he showered me with his love that only princesses deserved..
everything was there, the glittery lights, enchanting sounds from unseen or yet surround-sound speakers, the perfect view. even if the scene just played in my mind, if it was just my imagination or my neurons electrified.. it was certainly a package for a perfect fairytale.. my own fairytale
2007-07-25
17:45:55
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