Hi. I am learning English. I worte a letter to my friend but I am not sure if there are errors. So, could you correct it for me, if you have time...
Hey Kim. Thank you for responding my email. It looks like you are doing well, even though you had to repeat the course this summer session. Yes. we need to plunge ourselves into the Lord. But.. I feel incredibly ashamed of myself for not doing so. To be honest, I rarely didn't go to church since I came back to Korea. Many things didn't happen, though a few big things did around me. The more I am disappointed with people and myself, the more I find myself going far away from God. For now, it is not important for me to call on the Lord,but I look for him when I need a help. Shame on me. ^ ^;;;;;
I want to thank you. I felt my heart becomes warm when I read your letter. I mean it.
I gotta go... Today I am gonna go to a shopping mall near my house. My shoes is in rags and tatters. I really need to replace it.
Bo
2006-08-15
15:35:36
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