can you help me creat more 'mood' in my story. And help me make it better in general:
A Canadian tourist worked hard over the course of two years to raise money for a trip to Europe. When the time arrived, he took three weeks of vacation and flew to Paris where he stayed ten days; he then traveled to Germany where he spent the remaining of his wonderful vacation.
While waiting in the boarding room at the Frankfurt airport, on his way back to Canada, he ate a sandwich and put an apple in his hand bag for later.
When he was on the airplane, just before landing, the steward handed him a customs declaration, which contained many questions, all of which were answered 'no.' He was simply a tourist, carrying no weapons, no drugs, or anything else of interest.
After landing at the Montreal airport, he was randomly chosen for the baggage search. During the baggage check, the agent found the forgotten apple in his bag.
“Sir, what is this?” the agent asked.
2006-12-13
11:43:17
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