Give Me Some Feedback...Good/Bad
Drama.
Set: On a bench.
In the middle of a park right in front of a merry-go-round.
A Husband and Wife sitting calmly. They're Having some rough times.
PLAYING SCARED
The other day i was walking by here and something caught
my eye . I found the answer that i've been searching for...
(pause)
You see those kids on the merry-go-round
(she points to the ride in front of them)
After pushing it to full speed they jump on, grasp the bars
and hold on for dear life
Screaming...while gravity tries to pull them apart.
They laugh and smile...
But along with those smiles comes the thought that enters every kids mind atleast once.
Even for just a moment.
The moment where they realize that they could fall off.
(crying)
so some choose to fill up with fear.
This is that ride.
We are those kids.
I could smile forever,
But something tells me you are more than ready to fall off.
Tell me If im still on that ride who will catch you when you fall
2007-02-14
09:44:32
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