Abriel could easily see the red pair of eyes floating towards them from the back rooms.This had to be a nightmare,she thought as Mel jumped over the the dusty couch that they had pushed in front of the broken door and onto the wet ground outside.She then reached in to help her baby sister ,Lydelle .
Kenny,Adreine,s brother, went next,and as Abreil made her way over the cushions,she spun once more to see that the eyes had settled on her.
"Abriel,we gotta go!"
Before she could say anything at all,she felt Adreine's heavy handed grip on her shoulder push her back ,over the couch and onto ground.She then heard the soft thud of Adreine striking the ground behind her and both girls then scrambled to their feet.
Kenny,Mel and Lydele were already down the street ,not sure to keep running or wait for them."Just keep going!"Abriel screamed.The rain had stopped,and the air was left with an icy chill that left their breaths like smoke in their faces.
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2007-03-15
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