I am reading a poem that I wrote in assembly today. (I am 13).
Here it is:
Howling, crying in the night
their voices pierce the air
and echo around.
One right after another,
needing to fill the otherwise empty sky
until they must once again
hide while the rest of the world
is awake.
What should I title it and what do you think?
Thanks!!
2007-03-16 02:28:02 · 19 answers · asked by Rachel K 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
"Howling"
"Night's Echo"
"Crying the Night"
or maybe "once again"
It was a very Nice one.thanks for sharing.Hope to write more good ones like this;)
2007-03-16 02:51:27 · answer #1 · answered by Master Gwurd 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
"A Stirring Silence" or "A biting winter's night"... It reminds me of a winter scenery, it's extremely cold and steam is coming out of the wolves' mouths... Have you read G.R.R. Martin's books "The Poems of Fire and Ice"? or something like that... it's awesome! So far, some 4 parts of this epic fantasy have been published and your poem reminded me of his description of darewolves.
2007-03-16 02:42:10 · answer #2 · answered by Cheddo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Hiders
2007-03-16 03:50:40 · answer #3 · answered by snaggle_smurf 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Noises in the Dark
2007-03-16 02:33:34 · answer #4 · answered by Steve B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is great, I would call it, The New World Order
2007-03-16 02:40:29 · answer #5 · answered by Tumi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow. That is an amazing poem. I think you shold call it 'The wanderers" or "the lonely" or even "shadows of the forgotten darkness"
2007-03-16 02:32:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The noise in the night
2007-03-16 02:31:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Cry of the Wolf
Coyotes' Cry
2007-03-16 02:32:57 · answer #8 · answered by Bailey 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey that was cool, also a lot of famous poets leave their work untitled so dont feel you have to name it. I also think that you should name it yourself. Its your creation and only you should take credit!! well done
2007-03-16 03:31:17 · answer #9 · answered by R.L.L 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
1.Sorrows of the heart
2.The meaning within
3.Broken heart of a shattered world
4.A loney tear
5.Whispers of the mind
I hope one of these will work for your beautiful poem
2007-03-16 02:40:36 · answer #10 · answered by kandn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋