This is just what I tossed off last night because I couldn't sleep.. Please give me some constructive criticism..
Aura of the Rose
A single red rose rests upon a grand piano, relishing in its own delicate beauty. The room contains no walls, its boundaries are limitless. A rich, midnight black is present throughout the atmosphere. Though the room exists boundless, the rose possesses a divine aura which blossoms in the eyes of many. It signifies a vast number of things; Loneliness..Hope...Romance..Solitude... Yet, somewhere, with all its meanings, lies a hushed heavenly elegance.
(I do know the first two setences are run-ons, and there are a few sentence structures which are incorrect, but I left them alone so as to keep the flow of the statements.. Please be honest.)
2007-02-27
03:42:22
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