My name is Gabriel Vasquez Moreno, I went through a lot of challenges during my Junior year of high school. I want to be accepted into Dominguez Hills. I do not wish for sympathy, but for one chance to prove to my self all that I have been through will reach an accomplished end.
The time consuming experiences were moving, and caring for my grandfather who was very ill for 2 months. I could write about the hours I spent facing these challenges. But no, I’ll save you the time and empathy. Because there were greater challenges I had to overtake. I may sound dull, or even rude but don’t judge me just yet.
As you can see my two last names are from my mother and father. I thought I should be proud of my own two last names my parents gave to me. In reality I found out in my fist semester of Junior year my last two names were given to me due to a family feud. You may or not believe this but, these two last names brought headaches and tiredness. My own family arguing. This was the main reason my grades lowered down. Again I do not wish for sympathy I need one chance from this university to get away from all these headaches and to achieve my desired goals.
My family feud tired me out for 3 months I arrived to school everyday worn out. I only wanted rest. The reason why I was so tired was because my brother and sister were not being recognized by my family and their own grades started slipping. I stayed up until 12 pm fixing their homework errors I woke up at 5 am to get my brother and sister for school. Both my brother and sister graduated from elementary because of my decision to not allow them to fail. I believe my parents only gave them food and a house to live in, they expected me to teach and show both my brother and sister how to respond to the society they live in because my parents do not speak English. I felt the teachers did not care of the problems in my house I never really complained to the teachers or a counselor because I did not have time. I was failing most classes. At the end of the third month the feud actually stopped. The class work was piled up in my backpack. I completed most of it and turned them in.
Despite all my problems in my junior year I hope the exception comity gives me the opportunity to study in Dominguez Hills. I chose Dominguez Hills because , I know I can achieve at this college. My ambition to keep up with my class in the last month of my junior year allowed me to earn the 5 credits from the University. Before you the exception comity I have written this personal essay to let you see the fundamental achievements I will accomplish. I hope you, the exception comity, will reach a decision that will help give me a chance to get a great education.
I look forward to continuing to study at Dominguez Hills.
2007-04-15
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