I thought this would be a great place to ask.
I'm working on a novel, and plan to have a scene where a 22 year-old girl has an argument with her dad, then goes to talk to her 25 year-old brother, in tears. He's already in bed, but invites her to stay in his bed for the night (large bed... no touching), and they talk a while.
I guess I have 2 questions:
1) If you read/watched a scene like this, would it bother you, or make you say, "'The heck?"
2) Would you be bothered to hear about a brother/sister of opposite sex in bed in general (nothing sexual or romantic - just as a normal thing)?
I'm going for completely natural here, but unsure of reader response. Thanks. :-)
2007-02-19
11:11:31
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