ok i wrote my essay what do you think?......
the person who i thought influenced me more than any famous person and who i idolize is my cousin kelly,her confidence and determination is what really inspire me,she says what she feels and does not care what anybody thinks of her, she knows what she wants in life and will nmot stop until she gets it. kelly is extremely hilarious, sometimes i find myself acting and talking just like her and cant wait until i can see her again. i just wish i could be more like her.
does it sound too stalkerish or childish???do i have wrong punctuation,i seem to have a prob with that.
2007-09-04
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