Here is a passage from what I have been writing so far.
"It was the chair," he said.
"Yeah, it was." She replied sarcastically.
"Sorry 'bout Ted..." Peter started, but Carol interupted with slight annoyance in her voice, "You know what, I'm kinda bummed out about talking about it."
"Fair enough," he ended.
Carol leaned back in her seat and closed her eye. She looked like she had spent the whole night up and had dark circles under her eyes, and slight hints of tear stains on her rosy cheeks. Peter had the sudden impulse the kiss her, and leaned out of his seat, but hesistated. He never handled situations with women well, and would always clam up at the last second.
Carol opened her eyes, she had heard the movement and saw Peter staring at her, hunched over.
"What?" she laughed, "You look like you are studying me, something wrong?"
Peter leaned back in his chair and smiled, he was laughing at himself on the inside of his cowardness with women. "No."
2007-07-03
09:23:18
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