My sister Emily and I had anticipated summer vacation for a long time. Now that it was finally here, all the tiny pleasures of television and sleeping late had gone. Now that this had become part of our regular routine, everything seemed boring.
The afternoon sun was especially hot today, making me feel as if I were living in a desert rather than Louisiana.
Of course I can't give you all of it. I realize this is probebly boring to you but all I ask is that you tell me if you like my wording. Tell me if I give enough detail and if you have any way to makeit sound better please tell me. thank you!
2007-06-08
07:33:59
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***Lena***
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