Soldier
Hush child, do not weep.
For Daddy has not departed.
He still is in your heart,
In every part of your soul and spirit.
He’ll continue to sing in his hypnotic tone.
During the tempestuous darkness.
He’ll embrace you in his glowing passionate arms,
And provide you with tenderness and affection you lust.
Hush child, do not weep.
For Daddy is in eternal rest.
He is in a promised land, with gates made of pearls,
With harmony, blue skies, and bliss.
Hush child, for Daddy died fighting.
For he fought for you.
He was a hero, a patriotic fool.
He moved with might, and potential.
Every step he took, he thought of his little daughter.
If he’ll ever observe her naive grin,
Ever perceive his name from her pleasant and satisfying lips,
Ever clasp her tightly into his thirsty arms.
Hush child, do not weep.
For Daddy loves you.
Daddy wanted you to be free, never have to sing like the cadged bird.
He desires you to extend your wings and fly.
Hush child, do not weep.
For Daddy was a warrior.
Stand with pride, and hold your head up.
Be proud, have trust, stand tall and bold.
Hush child, do not weep.
For Daddy was a soldier.
Pleease? Any negative criticism plezzze. I want to make this poem really good, pleeeze tell me points were my poem is weak and what you suggest i dooo. THANKS :)
2007-03-20
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