I usually send mine to Poetry.com for the free copywrite. I also send some to a company in England. Poetry. com offers CD's with your poetry critiqued by a so-called professional poetry reader. OMG! They fouled up the meaning of my poem (below), read it wrong, added words I didn't write (UGH! like THE rain...not rain), and even compared my poem to John Keats, saying it was about earth, when it wasn't. It's about abortion! They had the nerve to call it full of vitality, when the dang butterfly was stepped on and killed!!!!!
Do you think these so-called professionals know wtf they're talking about?????
Pretty Butterfly, Don't Cry
Like stepping on a butterfly
Who is wet and cannot fly,
And on the sidewalk, trying to dry,
Knowing rain, the reason why
That its own beauty could not shine
Until the tears of God's great sky
Would set it free, so sparkles climb,
And come to shallow human eyes.
But so, it never did arrive,
That its life could live, but died.
And all that flashed within its mind,
Was that love didn't come this time,
As the whim of foot declined.
Oh, don't cry, pretty butterfly!
Your life, snuffed out, not defined!
Never mind. Go ahead and cry.
Tracy L. Richards
Copyright ©2007 Tracy L. Richards
2007-11-30
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