'Untitled'
Did you make the big mistake?
Was the good advice a fake?
Were you swayed by the media?
Did you just get the wrong idea?
Did you play roulette with an automatic?
Was the Reaper just too charismatic?
Whatever it was that happened here
I didn’t want you to disappear
2007-11-30 05:12:47 · 12 answers · asked by kleptomanic sheep 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
hey sweetie, wow another one so fast, when I read this one my first thought was that it reminded me of an Avril lavene song,,,I'm not a fellow poet, but I just know what I like and I liked it very much, like I told you yesterday I think along with the poetry,,,I think you could be a song writer, I'm sure you've heard that many times,,,I give it a (10) have a good day :)
2007-11-30 05:48:44 · answer #1 · answered by Elizabeth (the jewish princess) 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Big Mistake.
Since it is clear that the individual you're speaking of, did indeed make a wrong choice, mistaking a meaning, it is appropriate to name the poem for what you intended the reader to understand. Not to just understand the answer at the end when you told the person you're writing about, that you didn't want them to disappear. There was a misunderstanding, and to show the true meaning of your poem is to get to the point with your title. You also did, in the first sentence, say the words, The Big Mistake.
Happy writing, fellow poet!
2007-11-30 05:28:44 · answer #2 · answered by xenypoo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Did You?
Ur asking a lot of questions so I think if the title is a question then it would be apt.
2007-11-30 06:02:01 · answer #3 · answered by Ayanna 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My techniques: - An task to Die For - The Chronicles of recent Norcia what's the boys call? you will have his call be the call. something like "The secret of Jonathan Miller". They suck, huh? :( lol
2016-11-13 01:50:25 · answer #4 · answered by deviny 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dont fear the Reaper
2007-11-30 07:24:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked the poetry and I would title it" Stay".
2007-11-30 07:38:26 · answer #6 · answered by Calamity Jayney 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Roulette i would call it Roulette : )
2007-11-30 06:48:49 · answer #7 · answered by cinnamon swirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
" Wrong Answer"
Is this for the departed yahoo answerers who couldn't take it?lol
2007-11-30 05:26:05 · answer #8 · answered by Misty Blue 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
only get one go with a automatic.... ONE CHANCE...i like it
2007-11-30 06:10:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"I didn’t want you to disappear"
2007-11-30 05:47:23 · answer #10 · answered by Krazy G 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋