I have to write a short response to get in the Music Honors Society, please tell me what you think about my paragraph, and if you criticize something, please expand on it. All help is appreciated.
Music has been a big part of my life ever since I first started with my flute. It helps me to express myself and it defines who I am. I have been greatly inspired by music and it is the biggest thing that keeps me going in life. In the past, music has helped me contribute to my community by playing for the church, solo or in ensemble, and singing in the choir. Music is the only thing I want as a career, either to be a band director, or in the symphony. Nothing would be better than inspiring other people to be creative and live a life full of music. I would encourage people to be involved with music because it affects everything and everyone, and all music is performed uniquely. To get people involved with music, they must be able to see how it can affect one’s life, and how it can
2007-10-04
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