The guidelines are:
Line 1: One noun (love)
L2: Two adjectives to describe the noun seperated by "and"
L3: A verb (action word) and an adverb (describing the action)
L4: Start with "like..." and compare it to something
L5: Start it with "If only ..." and state what you with it could be
It's for a childrens prayer book, and I've been sitting here for an hour trying to figure out the perfect prayer to match the guidelines.
This is the one I made up:
Dear God, I love thee with all heart and soul
So God please help those with no true heart and an empty soul,
So that those people can live happily,
Like my family and myself,
If Only we could all feel happy.
Amen.
Is it good, and do you think it follows the guidelines pretty good? I stil have 2 more to go, so I wanna make sure i'm doing it right.
2006-11-16
06:38:04
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