An accidental encounter happing to me when I was a high school student has been deeply engraved in my memory. It not only changed my dull life but also let me meet a girl who is worth me spending my entire lifetime to care and protect. To this day, I always feel that my heart is replete with happiness when looking back on my happy past. Now, I want to share my love story with you and I hope you, my fellow, can also get the happiness that belongs to yourself.
That day, after borrowing some of my favorite books in the library, I walked down the stairs in a good mood. All of a sudden, I casually glanced at a beautiful face flashing in front of me. It was not until more closely looking at her face that I found that she was a stunning girl with a flaming red hair and pale skin and her beauty was beyond description. That girl’s attractive face like an angel and slim size caught my attention. My heart full of passion had flown toward her; as a result, I failed to pay attention to other things only looking at her all the time. However, unfortunately, because of much attention, I didn’t watch where I was going and slipped on an orange-peel. I fell down from the stairs to the ground so that I got the severe scrapes. With the torturing wound, I started to cry out loudly. Suddenly, that charming girl rushed toward me in no time and carefully bandaged my serious wound with her warm hands. At that time, I felt a great deal of euphoria and the pain of my scrapes seemed to disappear in a flash.
That event let me get acquainted with that girl. As if there was a fatal red thread that tightly fastened our hearts. Over time, after a decade, that girl and I have become a couple and we have a happy family that everyone envies very much.
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2007-01-28
12:08:47
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