At our wedding my fiance and I are presenting each of our mom's with a single white rose (our Dad's are long out of the picture) I wrote this and it will be read at the beginning of the ceremony. I need honest critques of it. And should I read it, despite the fact that it will make me cry or should I have the pastor read it? (My fiance doesn't want to read it he doesn't like public speaking)
To our moms:
You've taught us so much in our lives. You taught us to walk and when we fell, you tenderly showed us how to stand back up and try again. You taught us to speak but also demonstrated how important it is to sometimes be quiet. You showed us how to learn and when we thought we knew everything, you reminded us that we did not. And one lesson you shared has helped bring us here, to our wedding day. For you are the ones who taught us how to love by loving us. On this special day we offer you a symbol of our gratitude for the years you spent teaching and loving. These roses
2006-07-11
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