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The purpose of creating a strong recreational center would be for the purpose of keeping money within the city by the city offering recreational services. A recreational center that offers excellent offerings such as arcade machines, a skating rink and party rooms, could deeply add to a recreation center’s demand. Also if a recreational center was able to add these attractions, to go along with services that are usually expected to go with a recreational center (such as a pool, work out facilities and multipurpose rooms, revenue that would have other wise gone to companies outside the city, would stay in the city.
2007-06-15
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