The assignment and first draft are right here:
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n157/wiltzandrew/untitled.jpg
Is there some amazing person out there that can help me throughout the next few days, so I can improve my personal statement? I have 300+ service learning hours, and a 3.5 GPA, but a 20 on my ACT. I need to make this good lol. Is there a kind soul that will read my first draft, harshly criticize, read my second draft, harshly criticize, and read my third and possible fourth draft, to help me improve? I'm fun to talk to, also lol. I'm an amateur astronomer, a Scrabble champ, a Chess aficionado, soon to be published author of a science fiction novel, proud student and future doctor. I can talk for hours and hours about my theories in science, theology and so on. Pweeze help! Take care ya'al! Ciao!
-Andrew
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2007-11-27
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