I just wrote this up in the last couple of hours and I really need someone to give me more ideas....make it better....give a twist ending to it...etc....so please read it and then let me know what to do next.....Thanks!!
The sky was black and full of clouds. The cold wind cut my face like a sharp knife. Everything was pitch-black. As I stalked in the darkness, I could hear the last few insects chirping and hissing above me. The moon slipped out of sight and left only a dim light. In this lonely area, everything was quiet and still, except for my figure that was lurking in the shadows. I was very nervous though, but not enough to let my brother steal my girlfriend.
As I stalked in the darkness, I could barely see where I was going, since the blackness was thick – so thick that it could almost be felt through my fingers. It was a mystical night; there was not one person or thing in sight, and I felt a sense of triumph creeping up my spine.
2007-06-02
18:24:52
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