I'm writting a staory that's about family and stuff. It's heart warming. This section I'm going to give you is one of the down sides of the story, kind of near the end, but the ending is happy. I plan spending a couple years working on this story, so this is what I have so far.
Phil got to the cemetary. He got out of his car, and stood at the gate. This was the cemetary where his father lie. This was the cemetary where his brother lie. This was the cemetary where his wife lie. He had never visited one one them.
He walked towards Maddie, slowly. "When the dog bites, when the bee stings, when I'm feeling scared," He started to sing. Fear crept into him.
He approached the gravestone. This was it. Ther lay Maddie. He wasn't more than 4 feet away. Finally he knelt in front of it. He didn't know what to do next. He never visited a cemetary after the funeral before. It was just than he realized that his wife was right below hid knees. Everything was becomeing real again.
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2007-11-19
07:44:17
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