If I were to start the prologue of a story with a woman telling a story her mother used to tell her as a child (this is fantasy) about how a certain race came into being and then was forced into seclusion, would you want to read on? It is more about a war of power, and someone who wants to eliminate an entire race. Would this be a good opening, or would you not want to read on? I do not trust posting any of it here, or else I would ... so if not, how could I change it? Should it not be told as a "childs tale" and actually told as a real story about a young boy? Or should it be introduced in the book later? This is my first time so I am not quite sure on how to write openings yet, and what is catching to a lot of people ... it's soiunds quite dull when I explain it on here, but it is better on paper.
Any suggestions? Thanks! :)
2007-10-02
11:57:55
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7 answers
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♪Eliza Beth♪
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