tell me whether its good or not. And i can use advice on how to make it better. Some editing would help to. I want your honest opinon. I want to be better writer. And btw, the grammer isn't very good, so yeah don't expect it to be all great. so here it is.
PULSE
Screaming, that’s all I heard. Was the screaming of some poor worthless bastard. Well that’s all you really start to hear when your boxed up in a big, perfectly squared-shape, dark, unpleasantly foul smelling room. It wasn’t overly elaborate. The damp floor was concrete; the four surrounding slabs of stones they called walls, was penetrated by a foul smell from who knows where. Cobwebs filled in the space in the dark corners. My only source of light was from a single dim light bulb that seemed like it was super glued to the ceiling above me.
But wait, I haven’t even got to the best part yet. I don’t even know the freaking location. Yeah, that’s right. I just woke up sitting in some chair, with my arms and legs
2007-10-05
13:09:43
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