Plz rate from 1-10 and tell me what I did good and what I did wrong.! Thanks!
Here is two and plz tell me which one you like better but give your opinion on both!
Do you, Do I?
As my mind wonders,
My mind also ponders.
Do you really love me?
Do you really care for me?
Do I really love you?
Do I really care for you?
Yes, I do.
Hopefully you do too.
This second one I did, and for those who just answered on a persons "does this poem sound good" for Kiwi,.. this is Kiwi,, if yall want proof.,, tell me ok.. well.. here it is ..
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A Tiny Seed
My love for you started out as a tiny seed. It started out as small as a grain of salt, but it grows each day. It cannot grow with out you. Your touch, your voice, and your deep beautiful eyes, make my heart melt and my love grow each day.
It is still growing.
2007-02-17
14:55:24
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