Yes thier will be lots of mistakess. Sorry. I am writting a book and I would like to know if i write well. this is a excert from it so you won't be able to understand it fully until you read the book but tell me what you think of my words. Sarah is the main charector [its in her piont of view].
Jason and I sat down under a shaddy tree. "This is nice," i said, looking down. Jason, sensing something was wrong, gently touched my hand. For the first time in a while, butterflies filled my stomach and a tickling sensation went up my arm. I jerked it away and quickly glanced up at Jason. He looked hurt and confussed. He put one fingure under my chin and tiled it upwards, forcing me to look at him. Suddenly he tried to kiss me. Quickly, I put a fingure on his lips to stop him, "No Jason," I said.
I wanted to kiss him. He was my boyfriend after all. The only thing stopping me was the thought of Piper and how she hadn't aproved of Jason. "What's wrong?" he asked.
2007-06-07
10:12:16
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