I wrote this poem and I need some feedback about how good/bad it is
The poem is about me not knowing how to write rhyming poetry, hence the title. Just tell if it sucks or if its good. I don't mind negative feedback.
The Rhyme
The rhyme, The question, The allusive query
Escaping tongue, Caught in hand, Entombed in ink
A broken shard of fondness shaped into refined envy
Sinuous rapids of conundrums afflict the writers’ sync
Hypnotized by resolve, mesmerized by tenacity
Cloaked under puzzling venture
Mislaid rendition vanishing courtly
Waltzing rhythm of assonance
Radiate prestige on this bookish raconteur.
2006-11-25
21:36:08
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