ok, i posted the same poem few in ago, but in the wrong place. so now i am posting it again, hopping to get some feedback. this poem i wrote to a friend, and i just want to know if its good. thanks
sometimes life can be hard
but it help for somebody to say
that you are always on somebody's mind
each and every single day
i am thankful to God
that he send you to me as a friend
and there is nothing in the would
that i couldn't on you to depend
when the waters get rough in the future
and they turn sorrow and gray
remember that i'm always behind you
every single step of the way
so never feel lonely with out me
cause i know you'll always be fine
even thousands of miles away
you'll always remain in my mind
2006-10-06
17:16:14
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