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ESOTERIC TRUTH OF LOVE
Come what may, twister or storm,
Trees have to dare
Just like you they too can't run,
But they're still there
No matter how fast you chase it,
Love is so spry
People spend there entire lives to find it,
But it disappears in a blink of an eye
It is saddening that you have no friends
But even if you had many,
The search for someone special actually never ends.
It's mournful that you've got no one, no shoulder to cry on,
But even if you had someone,
There's no one better than yourself to rely on
You tried to get love from others,
And miles away you sorely flew
Love is not present elsewhere,
It's a feeling within you
You have too much to live for
And suffreing is perennial
Like you, I too looked for love once,
But I freed myself from this endless pursuit
'It's within me' realize this truth,
And see you'll conquer the world.
Composed by Rishikaysh
© 2006 Rishikaysh.
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2006-09-11
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