I am a non-English speaker, and learning English.
I wrote some sectences for my homework.
If there are something wrong, please correct it for me.
'What a sleepy day!
Even though it's raining outside.
I'm alone in my office doing nothing.
I want to sing, I want to dance.
What is happiness?
It was told that happiness is in your heart.
Doing nothing is a kind of pain.
Don't let me feel the emptiness.
What's the problem with me?
Time is precious,
but it doesn't stop even for one seconds.
I want to do something meaningful.
That must let me be happy and joyful.'
2007-07-17
18:32:55
·
5 answers
·
asked by
Jackyren
2
in
Languages