do you think this song i just wrote?

Question

ALONE

You told me to never cry

That big girls don’t cry

To never look back.( background Chin up).

To always stay strong

To never let anyone or anything above you

Ooooo wowooooww

But I failed all those missions

And you were by protector, my believer,

(Scream MY EVERYTHING)

You let me down

You made me cry

You lied……to me!

I guess I’m not a big girl.

When the world twirls

You always had another one of your ideas

That would kill me inside

But I had to stay strong because……

OOOOOWWwwooww

Because I could not cry

I would always lie

I would always pre-teynd

That everything will not go wrong

That one day (background- hopefully tomorrow)

That the world would twirl

And bring you right back to me.

OOOWOWOWOWW

I can not cry or else I would die iy Iy iy

We must carry on.

Alone.

You told me I had to stay strong.

You told me to never cry

That big girls don’t cry

To always stay strong

To never let anyone or anything above you

Ooooo wowooooww

But I failed all those missions

And you were by protector, my believer

You let me down

You made me cry

You lied……to me!

I guess I’m not a big girl.

When the world twirls

You always had another of your ideas

That would kill me inside

But I had to stay strong because……

OOOOOWWwwooww

Because I could not cry

I would always lie

I would always pre-teynd

That everything will not go wrong

That one day (background- hopefully tomorrow)

That the world would twirl

And bring you right back to me.

OOOWOWOWOWW

I can not cry or else I would die iy Iy iy

We must carry on.

Alone.

Answer 1

luv it.
nice song or poem.
A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

Cheesy and just like something Paris Hilton would write (not a compliment).

Answer 3

Another sad one...with a little anger too...

Answer 4

your gonna win a grammy..congratulations.

send it to celine dion.

Answer 5

whats with you and songs?

Answer 6

i love it it is really good