This dude has rejected all my previous poems saying I have no talent. What's your opinion of my final attempt?
dudes i like You medium-height
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dudes i like You medium height
they hang near me, not short, so right
they eat boiled oats, wild oats do
they grow fierce bodies, hard like You
they laugh with me, like the day
they cry by me, in man's way
they run to me, far away
they stay with me, You they may
they like what i do, dark light night
they do what i do, like Your fight
they feel my comfort, piece of mine
they push far in, from behind
the dudes i like You medium height
the ones who dream, but(t) all so right
the guys who growl, if they bite
the guys who's pound is worth my might
they kiss the path to journey's end
they lose the wrath from far within
the dudes i like You medium height
the top one who are You tonight ?
* * ok..burp, hey dude will you just eat my boiled oats and be my medium- height Valentine and kiss.
2007-02-14
02:01:40
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